Feedback

Today in class we all went around and viewed each other rough cut and gave feedback. The feedback that we received on our video was very useful. We need to improve on the lip syncing in a couple of areas of the video as it is slightly out of sync. As well as this, there are a couple of shots that are shaky or out of focus which we will need to either film again or remove. However, a couple of shots can be fixed by using the warp stabilizer. We found this feedback very useful in helping to improve our video. There was also positive feedback, in which people said that they enjoyed our use of close-ups. They also said that they thought our narrative was good, and that our actors and shots helped to make it all believable. An example they gave of this was a shot of our actor running. One other positive that we were given was the link between the narrative and the song lyrics. The feedback they gave said that they enjoyed the link, and that it made me the video more interesting. Below is an image showing some if the feedback that we were given: